I thought this joke was hilarious since my goal this week was to break apart and try my hand at composing a shot. but I ran it by casey and he seems to find it a little less than hilarious. anyway, Im pretty pleased with this.
I keep running into a problem though, I want to add more details to the woman's face (right, center) but then all the focus shifts to her... matter of fact, can you guys tell me if the hooded character and boy are even coming across as the focus? (yes the hooded character is supposed to be huge.)
this guy isn't quite done, but given the time I had to work with it I was pretty happy.
lemme know what you guys think.
thanks amigos
These comments are good ones. Just keep in mind what your focus is and make everything else in service to it! The thing that I see is that there's a general sense of brown permeating the image, which makes it feel unified, but you can liven it up and extend the space some. Consider throwing some streaks/pools of light across the ground beyond the crowd in the foreground, it could draw more of the focus to your real subject, the two figures in the back, as well as create more depth in the image overall.
ReplyDeleteLookin' good!